(I am so sorry I forgot to cite my references in my previous submission. I was just so excited to find this group. May I please ask you post this one instead?)

This is a wip I am working on. I would really love some crit and redlines to show my what I need to fix :)
As for reference, the basic poses were done using my fiance as a model…but I did use a few images for aid on the clothing.
http://download.agefotostock.com/fotos/bajaage/cached/578888/ESY-000768452.jpg
http://www.maurilioamorim.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/J-Crew-herringbone-vest.jpg